藍因家境貧困,以獎學金就讀全市唯一的貴族高中,女扮男裝和校內女生約會賺取生活費。但是學生會會長好像對她很感興趣...

Because of her poor family status, Ran got into the only noble school in the city with the help of scholarships, and she pretends to be a guy and go out with girls on dates to earn her living expenses. However, the student council president seems to be quite interested in her...

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Hiwatari, June 4th, 2011, 5:41 pm


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首頁彩圖!! 顏色有點平淡...除了草叢外其他上色都頗為滿意。

-希

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Coloured front page!! The colours are a bit plain... Aside from the bushes I am kind of satisfied with how the colouring turned out.

-Ki

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campanella, June 4th, 2011, 6:24 pm

意見
colouring:
以少女漫畫來講,顏色通常都已較淡. 以"romance"的角度來看,顏色要配的比較romantic.
e.g. 紅色系
(看一些 "colour theory" 的書很有幫助)

colouring 跟妳的 inking style 不搭

inking:
線太直了...應該可以加一點 'pen pressure'
線...有一點死...

action/body language:
...多一點動態...
e.g.可以讓女主角更lively一點

bg:
i know bg is a pain in the ass....but it gains bonus points towards your illustrations.

characters 如果只占 1/3的page, bg 很重要
後面的bushes 可以是花不是梅子...
(of course 如果你的plot裡面有把那個bush寫成一個key point哪就沒關西了)
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i think that's it....
however i do look forward to your story, cos there's a lot of ppl who does the "cross-dressing" story
i can't wait to see if this one's different from the others or not =]
hope you can take my suggestions into your consideration. xD


bolohanl, June 4th, 2011, 7:54 pm


awsome! cant wait for it to start ^v^


Chikage Godo, June 4th, 2011, 9:56 pm


cute uniform and cute cover!~~ can't wait for the pages >v<

EDIT: just read in your blog that you wanted some critique so i'll give one now xD

first off, it's a good concept and composition. the whole school uniform, and outside-the-campus thing gives a shoujo school life vibe :> and i like how it's not obvious that Ran is a girl.

so my focus will be the bg. the bush and the window are drawn and colored more simply compared to the detailed bricked wall (and that wouldn't really click). so my suggestion is to play around with your bgs more, like give it some more push. you can add more leaves and shades to the bushes, or put an extra frame at the window and maybe a pipeline (you can also adjust the frames' color so it's more obvious that they're made out of wood); all this so you can balance out the details. then there's the light source. i'm not sure but i think it's your style to make your shading faint but i highly recommend you to try out darkening your shades! :D


Izumi Hikaru, June 5th, 2011, 8:01 am


Looks nice!


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