藍因家境貧困,以獎學金就讀全市唯一的貴族高中,女扮男裝和校內女生約會賺取生活費。但是學生會會長好像對她很感興趣...

Because of her poor family status, Ran got into the only noble school in the city with the help of scholarships, and she pretends to be a guy and go out with girls on dates to earn her living expenses. However, the student council president seems to be quite interested in her...

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Comics - Blue Love 03 - June 7th, 2011, 7:43 pm


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Hiwatari, June 7th, 2011, 7:58 pm


我總是覺得...我畫的背景非常"唔掂"... <_<... 用不同角度畫也有些少難度... (練習中...)
請大家在故事,分鏡,背景,角度,網貼等方面給點意見,盡可能詳細一點。謝謝!

-希

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I always think... my background are a but "sucky"... <_<... And it is a bit hard to draw at different angles... *practises*

Please give me some suggestions on the storyline, panelling, backgrounds, camera angles, toning etc. Please be as detailed as possible. Thank you!

-Ki

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Translation for non-Chinese speakers

// Panel 1
Guy: Although he is a distinction student, and his home is poor,
Guy: the school is still too lenient on him! This is a noble school after all! Don't you think so, Yakaze?

// Panel 2
Yakaze: ...

// Panel 3 (nothing)

// Panel 4 (nothing)

// Panel 5
Ran: Mom, I am back! We have extra food tonight!
Arrow: remove shoes

// Panel 6
Mom: You're back?
Mom: Quickly take a bath and come for dinner!
Ran: Yes!

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Chikage>> Thank you~! Oh, right... the mouth is a bit off *did not notice* @_@ Speed lines... let me try that~ (seems to be a lot of stuff on the panel with that stone floor...)

Izumi>> Just like Ciffon said. That is a semi-top angle. When you look down from above, the things nearer to you will look larger.

campanella>> (lazy, so I will reply in English XD) Panel 6... yes, that guy's hand <_<... I don't quite like 小威's style... so right now I am just looking at the styles I like and see if I can make those effects @_@... Thank you for all the suggestions!! Pen pressure is surely needed XD *works on that next*

Ciffon>> LOL I know you are talking about the last panel XD That guy's hand is so poorly drawn that I want to cut his fingers off ;)

-Ki

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Ciffon, June 7th, 2011, 9:10 pm


LOL drawing fingers are the worst.. it takes me ten minutes to draw them ;v;

Don't worry, one time I had to make my characters wear gloves because the fingers were poorly drawn HAHA didn't turn out great unfortunately.

Ran is so cute~ ah you are making me want to draw him now!


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